Simplify this. A Recruitment AiDE, pt 5

Greg Wyatt • November 20, 2025

Making something simple without losing meaning is quite challenging.


It means you have to really know what you're talking about, so you can put forward an argument that has meaning for your intended audience.


These are rarely 8 year olds.


It's a key area in which most recruitment fails - adverts, job descriptions, careers sites, phone calls.


Especially when an omission can mean you may hire the wrong person entirely.


Ironically, it's overlong and could be simpler, without losing meaning. I didn't have much time to edit it.


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Who here remembers Maths at school?


When we were given a challenging formula to simplify.


A taxing task for many, but the point, which is valid in any walk of life, was that a simplified formula is easier to read while having the same meaning.


If you got the simplification wrong, your answer would be different to the correct one, with a different meaning.


Even if the simplified answer has little meaning to you, it is inherently easier to copy. Because it has fewer numbers and letters.


It’s the same in language. No surprise, given maths is language.


Fun fact – my Doctor friend Rich reliably informs me that many medical terms are in Latin simply to make them sound more plausible.


The reason, he says, is to make patients think Doctors know what they are doing and make the guesswork of Doctory seem more scientific.


I’m sure there are also reasons of consistency and actual Science, but let’s believe Rich for once.


Often the English translation sounds silly or trivial.


The terrifying malady Borborygmus is a rumbling tummy. If you suffer from Singultus, well that’s just hiccups.


How would you rather them be described?


Sounding clever is a valid tactic in US politics, and the filibuster is used to prevent decisions from being made, or from allowing others to have their say. Talk, talk, talk - so that no one else can.


Can you imagine how a date would go down if the other half filibustered their way through dinner?


As well as being aggravating, you wouldn’t come away knowing anything about them except that they love the sound of their own voice.


The danger of sounding too clever is that it pushes your audience away from finding real meaning.


This makes it a troubling truth that the majority of recruitment messages are nothing but hot air, dressed up with words that are hoped to seem grander.


The psychology is much the same as in Medicine, using Verborrhea to make us seem smarter and more trustworthy. I’m sure you can guess what Verborrhea is - it’s on my word-of-the-day toilet paper.


But the opposite is often true. If you hide behind clever words, it can show you haven’t a clue what you’re talking about.


What would happen if you write in the language of your audience, simplifying words and concepts without losing meaning?


For a start, your message would be shorter and likely more precise.


Here’s a list of classic clever words, and their normal counterparts:


1/ Utilise/leverage – use

2/ Facilitate – help

3/ Ascertain – find out

4/ Expedite – speed up

5/ Mitigate – reduce

6/ Acquire – gain

7/ Implement – carry out

8/ Paradigm – example

9/ Out-of-the-box / blue sky – creative

10/ Thought leader – expert

11/ Core competencies – skills

12/ Interpersonal skills – people skills

13/ Deliverables – results

14/ Quantifiable – measurable

15/ Synergy – collaboration

16/ Value proposition – benefits

17/ ROI – return on investment

18/ TLA – three letter abbreviation (tla) – always better to write them out first

19/ Disruptive – innovative

20/ Innovative – how so?


What confuses matters is that, much like in Maths, you can only simplify to a point. Words have meaning, when used well. Simplify too far, and they lose meaning and gain ambiguity.


Utilise has seven letters. Leverage uses eight, ineffectively. Use utilises three. Use wins, right?


Utilise is defined as “to use effectively”, so can be utilised instead of “use effectively”, because it’s fewer words and letters.


Leverage means, in this context, “to use for maximum advantage”. It sounds great if you leverage the power of LinkedIn but, let’s be honest, most of us just use it and many don’t use it well at all.


If this seems pedantic, consider this:


I feel used vs I feel utilised.


Using the simplest words possible, without creating ambiguity, makes your content more accessible, trustworthy, approachable and widens your audience.


Replacing simple words with longer ones to sound cleverer can both have the opposite effect and be used incorrectly.


Myself has six letters. Me?


Which sounds better: pass me the butter, or pass myself the butter?


If it doesn’t sound good, it likely isn’t.


Simplicity doesn’t mean ease, and it can take a lot of effort to write a message that has maximum meaning in the fewest words and simplest way.


While simplicity is a skill to develop, there are steps we’ve already talked about that help: so what, why does it matter?

If it doesn’t need to be there, take it out. If there’s a simpler word, use that. If a term raises a question, change it so that the question needn’t be asked.


Why say leverage instead of use? If you can’t answer, ‘use’ is the word.


‘Clever words’ can be confused with words that have meaning.


For example, a “Sales, Inventory and Operations Planning Manager” (SIOP Manager) is an integrated specialism in Supply Chain Management.


However, a Supply Chain Manager may have the skills set required, without necessarily considering themselves a SIOP Manager.

Wouldn’t you rather have that discussion, than let them assume?


AI – Large language models (LLM). This is an example of a catch-all marketing term that doesn’t have an implicit meaning.


The LLM that is ChatGPT is the hot AI discussion point today, but it isn’t genuine AI. Here the seemingly more complicated Large Language Model is the better term, if say you were recruiting for a Natural Language specialist.


An AI specialist might invite applications from Data Scientists or Computer Vision engineers.


So while AI might seem simpler and cooler, it can also be the dead wrong term to use.


I’m sure it’s an easy fallback if you don’t know what you’re talking about, but can you see how that will work against you?


The point of simpler communication is to give better meaning to the readers that matter – the candidates you want to talk to.


The next newsletter continues this theme, by looking at specific parts of recruitment where words can help and hinder: job titles, job descriptions, key skills, and so on.


I’ll show myself out.


Regards,

Greg


By Greg Wyatt February 26, 2026
So here were are, the start of a new series. This series may be around 10 editions, looking at the things other industries do that we can implement into recruitment. These were written 3 years ago, right at the start of the AI zazzle, and in some ways have dated quite a bit. In others, the way in which they haven't dated at all, because the principles of how we live our business lives can be universal. So, I'm not sure yet, how much editing I'll do, whether there will be any inclusions, or whether I'll leave articles intact, as a moment in time. I've learnt all of these notions from candidates and clients, as I came to understand the function of their vacancies. Hearing about the daily practice from people doing jobs, I couldn't help but notice the same relevance in recruitment. So while these articles are hardly comprehensive, perhaps they'll make you look at your candidates differently, in what we can learn from them, and how that might improve our recruitment. Why five? 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More than just solving problems, it’s about establishing practical countermeasures to prevent these problems from coming up in future. 5Y is an example of Toyota’s philosophy of “go and see”: working on the shop floor to find out how things work in practice to find ways for iterative improvement. This isn’t a theoretical idea to try out on a whim – it’s based on grounded reality and almost always works. There are two costs – time and accountability. Here’s a practical example, then a recruitment one. (Names have been removed to protect my identity) Problem 1 : The children were late for school. Why? Traffic held us up. Why? We left the house late. Why? The children weren’t ready on time. Why? Their school uniforms weren’t prepared. Why? We hadn’t set them out the night before. Here the countermeasure is to get everything ready the night before, rather than blame traffic for being late. Perhaps we might have gotten to school on time without heavy traffic, but that is an element out of our control. Of course, here there is another root cause – very naughty children – but better to focus on the simple changes. And sometimes traffic is the root cause after all, once you’ve ruled out other elements in your control. (2026 note: my eldest now often drives my youngest to school. A time laden solution I hadn't considered three years ago. Now I don't care if they're late 😆) Problem 2: Candidates keep ghosting us. Why? They weren’t committed to responding. Why? They didn’t accept my requirement for a response. Why? They saw no value in my requirement. Why? I didn’t create an environment where this requirement has value ( root cause 1 ). Or because they are very naughty candidates, with a bad attitude. Why have we allowed someone with a bad attitude in our recruitment process? Because we didn’t prequalify them well enough ( root cause 2 ) The first root cause is something we can work on by giving candidates what they need, building trust, and working to mutual obligations. There are many ways to do this – I’ve already talked about examples in previous newsletters. It comes down to good candidate experience and reciprocity. The second root cause requires us to work harder at understanding candidate needs, aspirations, behaviours and attitudes at the outset of a recruitment process. There’s a reason for their behaviour. We can be accountable for finding it. That’s no mean skill to develop, yet an essential one for anyone whose core responsibility is recruitment. And it’s hard to do in a transactional volume process, so the question then becomes, does your process help more than it hinders? You can apply 5Y to any issue you come across, as long as you are prepared to be accountable. At worst you may find that the things that were out of your control are at fault. In this case, you are at least armed with good information to report to your stakeholders, by ruling out other possibilities. What’s the point of doing all this? For me it’s continually improving how I recruit, with the consequence, in the example above, that I am rarely ghosted at all. And you can 5Y any issue you come across. Are poor agency CV submissions their fault, or in part down to your briefing and process? Are skills genuinely scarce, or is your requirement unrealistic? Is it true that your agency hasn’t listened to you, or do you engage the right partners in the right way? 5Y has the answers. Regards, Greg
By Greg Wyatt February 23, 2026
What follows is Chapter 21 in A Career Breakdown Kit (2026) . It's a good example of how a job search is an inverted recruitment exercise, but also how the same principles from recruitment can be applied in a job search. Market mapping is one of the first steps of a search process in what is often called headhunting. Here though, instead of an exercise that helps find a person for a job, you help find a job for you. This can be in one chunk, at the outset, and iteratively, as you learn more information. It's a great example of how LinkedIn can be used as a data repository, given the vast majority of professionals are present here. And if they are present here, the insight that is their careers is too, allowing you to identify potential viable employers, who works there, and therefore where else they may have worked, with further potential hiring managers. The snake that eats its own tail. Try doing the iterative work above, every time you come across someone new, whether in an application or in networking . You can use this to build out your network, identify companies to contact proactively. Simon Ward and I will talk more on this in our LinkedIn Live on Tuesday February 24th at 1pm GMT. You can join us, and view the full recording afterwards, here: Is The Nature Of Networking Changing for Job Hunters? If you happen to read this as a hiring authority, market mapping is one of the invisible processes in a structured search. It can often take me 80 to 100 hours to fully map a role for potential viable candidates, given I try to find non-traditional candidates as well as those that are easier to find through sourcing. 21 - Map the market Market mapping is a common activity in executive search. Why wouldn’t you adopt the same approach in your inverse of a recruitment exercise? The idea is to fully understand your market, so that you are better able to navigate it. This is a summary chapter because market mapping is both a strategic and a tactical exercise. I’ll cover some of the How of mapping in Part Three. There are three ways in which to map the market. The vacancies you are qualified for This is about determining which vacancies you should focus your attention on. In which domains does your capability directly apply? This could be context related, if your expertise is in start-ups, growth, downsizing or other contexts. It could be industry related - your process manufacturing expertise might directly apply in food, plastics or pharmaceuticals. It could be job related, with the right applicable skills. Establish where there is a market for you, and if what you offer is needed by that market. Advice on the transferable skills trap (p55) and whether you are qualified (p178) to apply will help. The geography of your job search Where are all the employers and vacancies that you can sustainably commute to? A geographical map can help you target opportunities by region. What resources are available to help you with this map? Searching online for local business parks, even driving around them, can give a list of viable companies to contact. Directories and membership hubs. Local newspapers, social media stories. If you see a company you like the look of, say from an advert, search on their local post code. Who else might be there? The chapter on doorknocking (p241) has more ideas. The people of your network Every time you come across someone you might build a relationship with, connect with them on LinkedIn. Then check out their career history. Who else have they worked with? Where else have they worked? This works for peers, hiring managers, and recruiters - a headhunter in one company may well have worked in a similar domain in a previous one. Is there anyone at these previous companies you should introduce yourself to? What about their listed vacancies? Building out a map of relevant recruiters to develop relationships with (if they answer the phone) can lead to vacancies. Treat it as an iterative exercise. Check out the chapter on networking (p236). This map isn’t just about potential opportunity. It’s also about information that might be helpful now and in future. This might be for job leads. It might be industry insight you can share through content. It may even be topics for conversation in interviews or with peers. Make sure you track it in the right way, whether through Notion, Excel or other resources you have available. With any information, check it is accurate, then prune appropriately. Prioritise on degrees of separation (closest first) and context fit (where what you need is most closely aligned with what you offer).